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[Mohaa Tutorial (flash mx)]

Very nice...

Very nice tutorial! It was hilarious how you made the beginning screen and stuff seem like the Medal of Honour series :P That gave me a good laugh. Pretty good content as well-I have never seen a Flash MX tutorial make daily 5th place. Therefore, congrats! You could have explained the script a bit more, however. I already understand all of the ones you've mentioned but it would help out if you explained the structure of Actionscript before stating a few. The drawings were decent, nice inclusion of music and graphics in order to make it look like MoH. I'm sure a lot of people have been wanting to view a tutorial like this in a while, and you've brought it to them. Congrats. Overall, good job. Could've been improved graphics wise (slightly) and be a more descriptive-but the content was there and kicking ass!

P.S.

I made a tutorial on the basics of flash. Can I get your opinion on it? (considering you're a fellow tutorialist) If you want to use any of it's content, be my guest.

Wonderer responds:

We will be our each other's guest. and by the way what does it means by kicking ass???? bad or good.

[Action Pongbat 0.5]

Man...

I think it's horrible that you've only gotten one review so far...I can see that you put effort in this, but it is not complete. The 'arcade' and 'new game' buttons didnt work for me at all...It wasnt very challenging either and no offense but I got a bit bored after the first few seocnds of it. If you only included everything at once it would have been wayyy better. Oh, and try to add some sounds as well. Sorry if this ruined your perfect streak of a 10 average in reviews but someone just had to tell the truth. Submit it when it is done, and it will do much better and be a much more enjoyable experience.

komani responds:

Thanks for you honesty.I threw this up here cause i wanted to see if I should continue working on it.And I might just do that.I do have sounds and more , and the next update will be the full I promise.

[Learn Flash with Skubz!]

Very good!

Well, I congratulate you on your effort on trying to educate people with what you know already. I especially liked that you mentioned to take a break, go enjoy life and dont stay inside and go crazy over flash because it really DOES have it's side effects...I should know...this tutorial reminded me a bit of my own actually...it's good to see people trying to help others with these tutorials...good job man, and even though I know flash already good effort. Check out my tutorial from my profile if you want to see my own tutorial about the basics in flash. I Want to see what a fellow tutorialist has to say ;)

Overall, good job and thank you.

afromonky responds:

Thanks for the VERY well written review!